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Open Poetry #48

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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-15 12:44 PM

It is true what lies beneath the surface,
but the surface is not transparent;
and the wish of the unattainable
is invisible to the one who cares.

Beneath the mask of perfection
is the demureness of a smile;
behind intuitive eyes of a woman
is a natural sixth sense to the blind.

When one is walking in shadows
it is easier to fulfill their needs;
walking quietly unnoticed
in the privacy of their heart.
Being on the outside looking in
into neglectfulness of love.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-15 01:08 PM

Very well thought out and stated, Victoria. This is one hell of a verse, magnificent!

"It is when one walks in the shadows
it is easier to fulfill needs;
as they walk quietly unnoticed
in the privacy of their heart.
Being on the outside looking in
into neglectfulness of love."

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-15 02:28 PM

Thank you Jerry,I appreciate your supportive comments as always.

~Victoria

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