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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2013-02-09 11:59 AM


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Snow is falling
Has fallen
And now
The forest is white

And now
Dressed in white
A beautiful woman
Is moving

The morning light
Beautifully white
Shines in her white hair

And now
She is moving
Thoughts of love

The whole world
Centered on her
In the white forest


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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-02-09 01:48 PM


I was hoping for snow last night but we didnt get any. A lovely forest you have painted.

~Victoria

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
2 posted 2013-02-09 01:53 PM


We haven't had snow in several years ... enjoyed the read, my friend.

j.

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