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Thoughts Unfinished |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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January’s cold heated By fire burning hot and bright A poem flitted Grab a pencil Take a note Too late – it is gone Over before it started As ashes blew like thoughts Away with the wind - Alison |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, I hate that. If I had a dollar for every poem that slipped away like that I could retire early.  Michael |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Don't cha just hate that! LOL! Happens to me all the time. Kat >^..^< |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Happens to me all the time. On the up side, you got a poem from it. Ida |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
ha, ha~~sometimes you just have to be quick about things! ~enjoyed! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
ARGGHHH Alison! That is the worst part of poetry all the ones that get away. I love this. Lori |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Been there, done that, kicked the pen away... which is probably why I couldn't find it in time this time! LOL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
real pain in the ashe when that happens..enjoyed this ali-san |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
It's still there! Remember, you are the Egg McMuffin® of poetry!  Enjoyed your tussle with your thoughts!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh poet friends ~ thank you all for understanding. It's great to be among you and know that simple frustrations are understood and shared. It's all good. Yes? For every poem we forget - there's another lurking in our minds waiting to be written. xoxoxo Love, Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
yes ... an experience we all have ... well captured! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Many thanks for understanding, Bruce. A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I can so relate ...feeling this way today actually .... that is when my thoughts go from flitting to sarcastic lol ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
How did this one slip by me? Yes, all of us can relate to this tale of the forgotten thoughts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
darn those flitting thoughts and poems! |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
It will return ) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good God, girl, that is just how it is... sometimes we are allowed to remember... sometimes...it was just a lesson. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Story of my life! Though I wouldn't ever be able to pen the experience so gracefully, I'd probably use a lot of curse words, lol.  |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I remember having poems that were beautifully thought up, but never written. I'm still trying to find them..deep within my mind. Enjoyed the poem, nice write. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
I feel what you mean. Love reading your writings. |
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