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Open Poetry #48

The nature of Fall

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2013-08-25 10:31 AM

Fall sun,
shadowy waifs recumbent
verdigris clad, upon umber,
somnambulant scrawling quills
dance dusty death rattles,
for Mariah.
Ashes of summer,
mould my Gethsemane,
Vesuvius cocooned,
dormant,
enticing equinox.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2013-08-25 12:57 PM

Not sure I followed the train of thought here correctly, but enjoyed the imagery nonetheless. Intriguing read.

Michael

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

2 posted 2013-08-25 01:45 PM

somnambulant... what an interesting word used in such an interesting way.

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