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Open Poetry #48

Mary Mourns

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

0 posted 2012-11-13 12:20 PM

We are God
and Love is our creation.

But as life is birthed
in the pains of labor,
a living soul is costly.

So Heaven is a lonely place.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-11-13 12:29 PM

Simple and straight to the point is this study of creation.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

2 posted 2012-11-13 12:37 PM

Hmmm, the idioverse...interesting! RV

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-11-13 11:48 PM

Nice writing...James

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

4 posted 2012-11-14 04:45 AM

what did he call me?

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-11-20 04:38 PM

I've read this through several times before replying. You have so much here, and the emotion is tangled and strong. Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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