passed on from her aunts auburn hair

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Open Poetry #48

passed on from her aunts auburn hair

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-10-14 09:48 PM

She use to wear a soft shirt
for her aunts admiration

They wore the words from Rome
across their chest
button down
easy streets through the corner buildings
like live wires through the open fields
of the soft desire

She wore her admiration
as if her aunt was still there
the auburn flavor
those strands that seemed
to carry through the fields
with their soft sleeves
across a mans heart
like a woven string
pursed across the lips of a woman's broken heart

They use to shy their eyes
like the shadowless tide
that came on the eve of night

A soft shirt
like her aunts
grandiose in its cut
as the pillars of the earth
came from the arch of the sun.

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

1 posted 2012-11-13 11:22 AM

intriquing. i don't know why i like the lines about the shirts. just kinda felt the fabrics as i read.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2012-11-19 10:11 PM

Ehtern-

Appreciate the comment. Take care

Cheers

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