Open Poetry #48 |
I Wish, Just Once . . . (from Faces of Love) |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I Wish, Just Once . . . (from The Faces of Love) Water always seems to have magical affects . . . especially between the toes, when walking just inside the tide line on the sand of a quiet beach. The mind tends to forget the harshness of reality as it listens to the waves sigh just as they reverse and head back to sea, as if they wish, just once, they could stay on shore. But they always return to the sea to be absorbed, dispersed, lost in the enormity . . . My heart does the same. I meet someone - they wash through my soul with magical affects on every atom of my existence, and just as everything in the enormity of who I am tells me how glorious love truly is, reality in all it's hidden magnificence turns its back on me, withdraws, disperses, and is absorbed back into the emptiness of one . . . not two. Love, I wish, like the water rushing between my toes, could, just once, Stay. © wesley james beard, jr. october 16, 2012 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You know, J, I don't know why people look forward to falling in love. From my point of view there is more pain and heartache caused from love that there is joy and happiness. Just my opinion . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
...I've no idea what life would be without wistful longing, but I can hope that your toes would stay so wet for so long, that they wrinkle. Thanks for sharing, j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is really splendid , jwesley, the images have eficiency and sensitivity, all onverge to a superb last verse, great and precious poem, yann |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I enjoyed your words very much. I like the way you express them. Very touching. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
J. From beginning to end this was splendid! lori |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
J, beautiful thought...beautiful poem. RV |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love, I wish, like the water rushing between my toes, could, just once, Stay. Amen... spoken quietly with the reverent tone this poem and its wishes deserve. *S* I still hope... I still wish... maybe once is in my future. *S* Beautiful write! |
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