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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-05-04 03:25 PM


    This and so much more

Under an infinitely vaulted
star-swept evening tapestry
and immortal timescape of
endless transience and change,
moonbeams dance
with gentle shadows
on soft silver sands
along this ancient forest
lake of dreams.
Here in the palliative  
calm and silence
one remembers only  
all that Love is, ever was,
or should have been.
You are this ...
and so much more.

                --- b. e. adams (5/4/2013)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (05-04-2013 06:36 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-05-04 03:35 PM


Simply beautiful, Bruce. Every word, every line and the whole poem as a concept of love's insurmountable give and take. All that, plus I found a new word, and I like "palliative" very much. It explains away the pain . . .

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2013-05-07 12:30 PM


You once again reunite us with a fullness found predominantly in love and nature.  Enjoyed!  
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2013-05-08 08:47 AM


Sounds like "Forever" love. Rare these days. Beautiful.
                           Ida

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2013-05-08 10:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
Honeybunch
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5 posted 2013-05-09 03:16 AM


Beautiful - again.  Yes, we remember and then return to our lives.
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6 posted 2013-05-10 01:39 AM


I see that which you paint with your poems.  And I am lucky to have a view out your window, Bruce.

A

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