Open Poetry #48 |
This and so much more |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This and so much more Under an infinitely vaulted star-swept evening tapestry and immortal timescape of endless transience and change, moonbeams dance with gentle shadows on soft silver sands along this ancient forest lake of dreams. Here in the palliative calm and silence one remembers only all that Love is, ever was, or should have been. You are this ... and so much more. --- b. e. adams (5/4/2013) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (05-04-2013 06:36 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Simply beautiful, Bruce. Every word, every line and the whole poem as a concept of love's insurmountable give and take. All that, plus I found a new word, and I like "palliative" very much. It explains away the pain . . . ~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You once again reunite us with a fullness found predominantly in love and nature. Enjoyed! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like "Forever" love. Rare these days. Beautiful. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful - again. Yes, we remember and then return to our lives. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I see that which you paint with your poems. And I am lucky to have a view out your window, Bruce. A |
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