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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-09-16 04:18 PM

A hard one to love
once he got my heart
Like a greased pig
to catch on to
Now so driven
having given
himself a mission:
My heart
to have and to hold
and protect from
poverty
That exhausted vessel
of love for me
gives cuddle
sealed with a kiss
Wakes to coffee waiting
to clear his foggy groggy
Lips and I love yous
heading for the door
On the highway
on the cell
all the way to work.
Touching his
bits and pieces
when I can
Circle Sundays
in bright red ink
Where when bedtime calls
all his undivided
is euphorically
mine.

LGR(C)9/16/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-09-16 04:37 PM

You are one lucky woman it sounds to me like. I'm happy for you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-09-16 05:01 PM

Thanks Jerry, Yes I am. I shouldn't be so envious of the time he devotes to work.

Lori

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-09-16 05:30 PM

You are very lucky to have a man like this to love...enjoy your Sundays...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2012-09-16 07:50 PM

Ahhh... more, eh?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how:
http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2012-09-17 08:37 AM

Sunday didn't quite happen....Friday night prempted. No complaints here.

Sunday was a good day and night irreguardless.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

MVV...oh yeah, I got a lot of these. I may repost a few. Thsnks!

Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2012-09-17 12:03 PM

"Like a greased pig
to catch on to"

Love your write, but this line
almost made me spew my coffee.
Way beyond cute.

Enjoyed, Lori!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2012-09-17 01:16 PM

Glad you got a kick out of it JL!

Lori

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2012-09-17 01:20 PM

Only worthwhile things are a cause for effort. The hard is all worth it on those Sundays I'm sure. A pleasure to read you again.

Michael

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2012-09-17 04:04 PM

I'm somewhere between an appreciative smile and downright envy... but completely loving the write!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2012-09-17 05:40 PM

Thank you Michael, What you say is very true.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2012-09-17 06:59 PM

suthern, either way, my poem touched you and that is what it is all about. Thanks for makin' me feel good.

Lori

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