Open Poetry #48 |
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locks and leaves |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
She cried inside albeit to a daring silence Those clothes fell onto an easy fall where leaves became the gentle tease to a rather frivolous fight between her heart and soul She was hurt unlike the summer earth a pain that ran from dusk till dawn under a lust of such wide surprise that she cried for heaven for a fate, oval shaped maybe slightly opaque That left her tears sordid unneeded of her iron grip, anymore. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write some deep poetry and yet you keep it soft and smoothe around the edges. Well done, Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Blues- I appreciate the comments. Happy you enjoyed. Cheers Tomer |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I feel the struggle in every line...only she will know which will win and if she can unclench her hands...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoying your poetry, Tomer. Ms. E |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Starttime- Happy it resonated with you. Cheers T |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Ms. E - I'm happy you are. Always appreciate the love. Cheers Tomer |
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