Beyond the Pier - Love and its lost companion

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Open Poetry #48

Beyond the Pier - Love and its lost companion

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-08-22 08:06 PM

They met where the lions
lose their growl
and the sunny streets of Wilshire
became void of sound

Under the oasis
where the lucidness of a dream became transparent
as they sat alongside one another

She sat motionless
a dream that manifested itself onto her lips
onto his long, curly hair
like a whip of fate
That shadowed the pier
as the sunset grew near

His long stare
piercing, sensual
but above all,
a conviction to blend her skin
onto his shoulder
and survey the night
as if it was a traitor
to their bouts of sensual silence

As the sunrise loomed
her eyes began to drift in and out
much like autumn
the leaves with their fringe tips
folding over one another

His gentle, shy eyes
settled over her
as the warmth of his fingers
lay steadily caressing
the left crease of her quiet, plush lips.

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-08-22 08:33 PM

I close my eyes and feel the senual beauty of this poem...love is expressed through the eyes and a sweet tender touch...I love it...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2012-08-22 11:11 PM

Very nice...James

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2012-08-23 02:57 AM

An exquisite affirmation, Tomer, of how human sensuality is at its pinnacle when the senses are wrapped in, melt into and respond to the glories of nature in the moment.

Owl

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2012-08-23 05:16 PM

Start-

Happy you felt the emotions of this piece. Always love the comments.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2012-08-23 05:16 PM

Thanks, James. Hope you're well

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2012-08-23 05:17 PM

Owl-

It is sensuality that brings us all together. I'm happy you enjoyed the piece.

Cheers

Tomer

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