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Silent Observer
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Silent Observer An evening with soft winds caressing Cumulus clouds fallow westerly breeze A tinge of reds and pinks appear slowly The glowing sky predicts sheppards delight Vision of ancient forest path appears Branches intertwine creating an arch Bare feet stroll peacefully to the meadow While breathing deeply pure of mountain air Across the meadow natures friends welcome The calm pool in the stream is inviting Magic from the well sparkles in the air But she is draw to a favorite tree The weeping willow is old by mans time Its branches part to allow her entrance Closing gently hiding from human view Eyes gazing upward following the trunk A sigh of deep contentment lights brown eyes The bench long used by the druids beckons Create from the magical oak tree It fills honest souls with serenity Enjoying the gentle falling of night Until a sweet silence fills the meadow A bright moonbeam falls across the entrance Reveals a couple laughing happily The silent observer witnesses love Knowing only true love could lead them here Sweet understanding grows deep in her soul Leaving them to privacy they desire Karen Mc Neil August 10, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice poetry!! The scenery was perfect. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
The scene is enchanting, sounds like a wonderful place to be |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is the perfect background for my next meditation, dear Karen. Simply gorgeous and so peaceful. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a wonderful, visual,captivating picture you have captured here, Karen. I'm there. Inside the tree. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
JL...I am glad you were able to see the vision...thank you...BIG HUGS* muted...part real part fantasy still it is a wonderful place to be...thank you...*BIG HUGS* Margherita...what a wonderful idea...I will also use it so...thank you, so much...*BIG HUGS* Jerry...Your company is more than welcome...thanks...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Weeping willows are my favorite! You took me on a most delightful trip with this one... loved the ending! Lori |
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