Open Poetry #48 |
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Heart of My Heart |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Heart of My Heart Heart of my heart: my infatuation in poetry and song – your words harmonious, symphonic, a phratry or dynasty written playing out a tune as if time were placated for you alone melding elements in thought and rhyme in sync… beguiling, sensuous, glorious in sight and sound treasures for hearing…and more, for holding, owned by heart and savored in thought – a sharpening of emotion, limning sincerity…warmth, clarity, a promising…loving Oh, heart of my heart, just now, you have captured mine… verse by verse I recite – breathing every word tasting experiences in charming display…captivating, your memoir – stirring and admired. Verse by verse in my spirit is a living treasure which is your song, your living, your sharing alive…distinct soul, generous and caring. Oh, heart of my heart, just now, you have captured mine… . . . Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
This poem is stunning and filled with a poets heart..I really enjoyed reading it...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Beautiful, JL. Ms. E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Love it! There's a depth there that is most gratifying to see. Helen |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Startime1955: Thank you Ms. E: I appreciate your kind words, or word, very mucho. James: thanks. Ms. Honeybunch, I am so glad you enjoyed. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When you give into the romantic within you, it is very satisfying to read, JL. This is one of those that is more than a little special. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-07-2012 09:39 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you Sir-Jerry. I do appreciate your reply. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and savored in thought – a sharpening of emotion, limning sincerity…warmth, clarity, a promising…loving ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oooooo this is so very passionate, you are all heart indeed JL~ Glorious poetry from beginning to end. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Blues... If I grin any larger my cheeks will burst. Thank you for your very sweet reply. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Truly beautifully expressed emotions. Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you, Margherita! JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a beautiful tribute... just lovely! You are as inspiring as you ever were... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you so much, Sunshine! I appreciate your kind words. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely stunning! If the one who inspired this wonderful romantic write isn't smiling ear to ear, there's something wrong! LOL |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you, sweet Texas Gal! You always reply with such encouragement. ![]() JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Romantic... So easy to imagine these words put to a voice.... Beautiful |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you for your very kind words, muted. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL, what a wonderfully romantic poem! quite special I believe. Lori ![]() |
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