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Open Poetry #48

Into Your Eyes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-08-03 10:20 PM

Into Your Eyes

I wander into your eyes
and you take me as I am
a surfer of the soul
wanting to ride your waves
all the way to shore
and then paddle out for more.
I am captivated by your style
I am enamored by your smile
please give me the pleasure
of being with you.

JamesLee
03August
2012

I borrowed the line in part
"I wander in your eyes"
from 2islander2 and his poem
"Captured by Your Deep
Blue Eyes" of 16 July 2012.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-08-03 11:26 PM

Nice James!
Ms. E

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-08-04 12:04 PM

Romantically beautiful...such sweetness in your words...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-08-04 07:32 AM

Very well stated, James.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

4 posted 2012-08-04 06:29 PM

The eyes have it! They seem to tell all if one interprets them correctly.

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