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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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in the midnight hour moving slowly to the soft jazz notes your eyes closed but feeling my overpowering love your hips swaying, your lips on my neck we press into each other your fingernails dance up and down my spine you are the gentle touch stroking Yardbird's deep notes into my flesh in the midnight hour prelude to jazz 'n loving you ©June 21, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-02-2012 09:43 AM).] |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
A very striking poem Jerry,strong images appear in my mind when you mention Yardbirds. I really like this . Well done. Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry, N'oz, I appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your words dance warm and inviting across the page. I love the way you take me there. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, Lori, it is my pleasure . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
jazz (or blues) 'n lovin' ... 'bout 'as good as it gets?!' ... fine 'slice of life' Impressionistic 'write!' |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. You got that right, Bruce. Thanks for stopping by. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
What a romantic heart you have...I am loving this look inside...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I admit to having a romantic heart, Karen, it hasn't always been like that, and I am enjoying this new me very, very much. Thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well said, my friend. Great title... and feeling. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Michael. Heehee I know that was difficult for you to say because there were no rhyming schemes within this one. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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