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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-07-31 07:16 AM

I am your last lover
my arms never tire opening and waiting
with patience I never knew I had
I offer you a last resort
no pretense dwells within my heart
I will love your weariness
your trembling lips without their rose
if you are sorrowful
I will coax a smile
I am your comfort without worrisome taglines
I am your last lover

©July 22, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-07-31 09:30 AM

Tender and written with a selfless heart...well done, my friend...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-07-31 10:11 AM

Thank you, Karen, for your sweet words . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2012-07-31 03:13 PM

I knew I would find a

today.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-07-31 03:35 PM

Hi, and thank you, Karilea . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-07-31 05:10 PM

Who would need another with words like these, JP!
Like Sunshine said, a keeper.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-07-31 05:21 PM

Thank you so much, Ms. E, I appreciate it.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2012-08-01 02:13 PM

I love this!

What a beautiful concept... to be the last and forever... the happy ending.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-08-01 02:19 PM

Thank you very much, suthern, for you gracious thoughts about my poem. It's the way I feel. It is from my heart.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2012-08-01 11:22 PM

And a golden heart you have my friend. Your words have come to mean much to me and this is no exception. I always look forward to you.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-08-02 06:05 AM

Thank you, Lori, good seeing you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

11 posted 2012-08-03 05:09 PM

to love everlasting...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-08-03 05:11 PM

Thanks so much, Karen, I appreciate your kind thoughts.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-05-2012 06:37 PM).]

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