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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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No limits A giant yellow moon climbs a fine pink and blue sunset sky over verdant-forest ‘endless’ hills of cicadas singing in ‘Deep-Time’ cadence of Summer passing. Let you heart be free from all shadows as this lustrous moonlit lake mirroring silver clouds and dreams. The brilliance and sweep of your mind and spirit need no limits by night or day. --- b. e. adams (8/2/2012) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Damn, Bruce. I'll be thinking of "this lustrous moonlit lake," for the rest of the day. I read it and immediately it was firmly fixed in my thought process. Hey! Maybe I'll even dream about it. Nice poem, but I like that line. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* I too captured the vision of your lake...the soft ripple of it brought instant harmony to heart and soul...magnificent..**BIG HUGS** *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, as always, Bruce. Whilst I love your always superb descriptions of nature, I especially love the positivity in: "Let your heart be free from all shadows" and "The brilliance and sweep of your mind and spirit need no limits by night or day." Owl |
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