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Open Poetry #48

metal & silk canvas

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-07-26 12:27 PM

she mentioned with a librarian lady like
kind of an air and those low cut buttons on
advertising tan distractions within the valley
of her bosom, leading me into temptation
to ignore the gulls above, reciting their bickering

how the eucalyptus trees were nudist nymphs
with very thin skin in layers for the taking
never aging beyond the perfect vintage
but also vulnerable to the winds of evening
when they moaned around eave dancing music

I spent hours inside the lounge of her eyes
acting like a stranger that found a home
and she blinked on occasion as if to assure
that the seat I had taken was with me in mind
although she bought it at her own yard sale

after sorting through all those useless watches
that always reminded her of what time it was
when she was trying to forget every moment
that had already been documented and returned
to the appropriate shelf of memory memorials

and she just wanted something timeless, but quickly

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daark

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-07-26 12:50 PM

"and she just wanted something timeless, but quickly"...these words bring it all together in the vision...wonderful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2012-07-26 05:18 PM

Your title says it all, but that lounge is so, well yanno.

Hugs D~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2012-07-29 07:19 AM

Ms Star, thank you

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Babyblue, it is always a great place to talk..thanks lady

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2012-07-30 07:31 AM

you could make a novel out of this...every stanza enticed

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2012-07-30 09:52 AM

Ms MMs..thank you lady

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