Open Poetry #48 |
Ebb And Flow |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
tide reveals seashells abandoned in time's passing life's hardened moments ©2012 by icebox |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
These few words speak volumes, Charlie. Ida |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes...it has been so long since I went walking when the tide is out...love it...brought back memories...thank you...*BIG HUGS*...I took what I love from this poem and found joy for myself... *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
within hardened shell nacre of pearl envelops the pain through time to reveal the iridescent luster of wisdom Ms. E |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh this is so nice, you combined the elements and the passing of time so beautifully! Good on ya, icebox~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Hardened sea shells as hardened hearts come along with the passage of time. But ocean waves bring clean sweeps and signs of change along with fresh shells and other bits of interest. jo |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
And how eventually the shells become the sands of time |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so true...love the replies also. M |
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