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The Walk |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Walk ~*~ Golden heads ‘neath fingertips on length of green graced stem to dignify with reverence I touch, but do not bend ‘Neath sky blue flecked of white as wisps of cloud stream by so light shall pass before the day then beckons night come sigh As the salmon eve delves deep into night’s twilight purple keep and mourning dove quits its song I find this love for you belongs In the morrow’s sun that brings love’s retain in all good things ~*~ (c) KRJ 7-21-01 |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* such beautiful visions are given on your walk...I love it...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You describe your lovely walk in a most graceful way. The colors, the extra depth you give your descriptive passages is not unnoticed, Sunshine. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine writing !! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"In the morrow’s sun that brings love’s retain in all good things" Yes, that's it! Ms. E |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..takes one to yet another magicland..yess.. ..spiros ~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely thoughts, Karilea  M |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very, very beautiful. xoxoxo Ali |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A delightful read, Karilea. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing, superb lines "As the salmon eve delves deep into night’s twilight purple keep and mourning dove quits its song I find this love for you belongs" Hats off! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Mellow, soft, and very sweet. Enjoyed the read. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I very much enjoyed your Walk, dear Karilea. Beautiful! Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you for taking us with you on your walk. Delightful! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"As the salmon eve delves deep into night’s twilight purple keep and mourning dove quits its song I find this love for you belongs" that stands out most for me, but the whole poem sings to me...in all its hues beckoning. |
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brian thomas madden Junior Member
since 2010-07-08
Posts 32Ireland (between an ocean and a rock) |
"Golden heads ‘neath fingertips on length of green graced stem to dignify with reverence I touch, but do not bend" stunning and beautiful Karilea |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hi ya sweetie, glad to see one of the old members, (not old folks) still hangin' round. hOW YA BEEN SWEETIE?...forgive the typos and caps now and then, it's the drugs and too lazy to go back and correct and it would probably be worse.... |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Ooh gorgeous, Karilea- I echo all above! Amaryllis |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
beautiful! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....A walk I would love to take with you!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beautiful and delicate the thoughts which spring from wandering in your footsteps. You do KNOW I love this don’t you? Mmmm I thought I’d left a clue or two.  as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Wow what a lovely poem ,so atmospheric that I could swear I was on the walk with you. Just lovely writing Karilea and thank you so much for sharing it with us. Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is filled with sunshine, and that Kansas touch, that only you can write. Always a pleasure to read you~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Where did Toerag come from?!!! I love imigary and so it follows that I love this poem. Well done, dear friend Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sorry for the spelling. I should get some help from Toerag |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You "walk" wth beauty and grace, Karilea. Ida |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My friends grace me...and I love you for that. Thank you! |
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