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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. On the platform At the station Morning A red glow In the air The sun not yet Risen in the sky Your train To arrive In an hour I have no idea What to do A single sparrow Under wooden eaves I should leave As I should have Long ago I can feel Another tragedy Coming on Yet here I am . |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I like the way you write.This is so interesting; the beginnings of a "want to read book". jo perry |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You always leave us wanting more of your story, John. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exactly my thoughts, with or without a train that is about to arrive ... The mood is so perfectly rendered in this scenery. Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
nice, my friend, with feeling... j. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
WOW!! you have a talent to make a person create the vision...well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all There is a story a legend now decades in the making which I myself don't understand being a deliberate man of reason Yet as I have all this time I am never the less going to see if there's any light Thanks again John . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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