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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2012-06-27 05:46 PM

Morning breaks a lonely heart
but not the part that mourns
and so it stands eternally
a monument to pain.

Not of stone - no, no, no,
but like a locket round the neck
to not ere drift apart
from the main attraction.

But the main attraction broken now
no longer stands on centre stage
and holds the gaze of one who loves
unblinking and steadfast.

Broken hearts and mourning parts
so near yet far apart
seek but never find
the element that binds.

But when it’s time at last, at last,
for the final bow
perhaps there’ll be a clap and cheer
for the drama of a life
that grants us all the breath of life
until the curtain drops.

Perhaps, perhaps!

Helen / 27 June 2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-06-27 05:55 PM

Sometimes it does seem that heartache and sadness is all we ever get out of life, Helen. Even when love comes our way it is usually accompanied with drama we never thought it would have.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2012-06-27 05:58 PM

Too true, Jerry. Thanks for the read.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-06-27 06:55 PM

*sigh* so much pain that lost love fills us with...yet how blessed are we who have truely learnd how to love completely...Your words always show me how deeply you love...I wish for you that the pain wasn't equally deep...thank you for sharing such a rare heart as yours with us...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-06-27 07:53 PM

The element that binds, well, that's quite the way to describe it Helen.
This is good writing using those morning breaks comparisons.
Hey, ya just never know, that element might be just around the corner.

Take Care

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2012-06-28 12:51 PM

Thanks, Startime and Eric. Your replies brought tears to my eyes and, Startime, aren't rare things locked away in glass cabinets to be admired from a distance and not touched?

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