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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
From point A to B, or a triangular C circles, squares, parallelogram tangents to drop off the edge of earth into the unknowns of universe From any point in time to eternity at right angles or refractions curving light into waves, prisms of color, fractal energies split ameobic unmolding the play dough masses From unknown quotients, hollograms appear, flickered dreams claim identity, and time fades into black holes along with unknown languages whose heiroglyphic thoughts await formation upon some future knowledge How shall I fathom anymore than simple rhythms of the pump whose sanguine desire is touch, fingertip to fingertip a poem breathing without words upon lips, whose kiss lives only in your eyes and I am pulsar born by your design? 6/22/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a grouping of world class words, Klassy Lassy! And all to ask the common question we all have from time to time. I love you. Can I? ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
 You coulda bowled me over with a feather with that response, Jerry. Such a sweet one!  Thanks for reading this. It's really a wonderful thing to see the love in your life right now. I wish the world had the same wisdom to live. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love it, Karen...such different visions this poem gave me...love is wonderful...I have a wish to find love someday myself...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Karen... There is no season to love. May your dreams come true.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"How shall I fathom anymore than simple rhythms of the pump whose sanguine desire is touch, fingertip to fingertip a poem breathing without words upon lips, whose kiss lives only in your eyes and I am pulsar born by your design?" Loved the last stanza ... everything above it was just too much for my 'math addled' brain though... j. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL... mine too...that's the trouble with geometry and Quantam physics. Thank you, J. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"...rhythms of the pump whose sanguine desire is touch, fingertip to fingertip..." Love these words, KL... beautiful! Ms. E |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
From Geometry to Physics to life, fine combination of subjects and words. Fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Damn I broke my protractor trying to figure this out......smile....twisted my poor mind up into a knot....smile.. Very very clever writing and it holds the reader right to the page. Great stuff! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Classy write, Classy Lassy. Ida |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ms. E. my favorite, too. How rarely our fingers are still, and they speak volumes. Thank you for the sweet reply. ```` Prasad, I am glad you stopped to read, and appreciate your eye to my offering. ````` Eric, you made my morning with your protest and broken protractor.  I needed the chuckle! I've broken a few of them myself, and a chain of words is sometimes like the necklace you can't get unknotted, so you just stick it back in the jewelry box. I'm  ```` Ida, it's good to "see" you!  Thank you, too, for your kind words. [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (06-25-2012 05:12 PM).] |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lassy, you have all the right angles and may your compass point in my direction any time. I would willingly fall into your trapezoid! You are without parallel! Now, having gotten that silliness out of my system, let me just say the the poem is brilliant....no surprise. You do what you do so very well and you always impress me as a person as well as a poet. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Michael, I know I have a lot to learn about poetry, but, it's been a door open to friends that I cherish and would be very lucky to ever meet. You are a wordsmith extraordinaire, as well as a friend, and your comment means a lot. [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (06-26-2012 12:13 AM).] |
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