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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
0 posted 2012-05-19 04:06 PM

I.  ancient rocks
    bathed in silence___

    a loon's cry


II. By the rocks a dragonfly
    time-ripples on this lake
      of dreams

               ---b. e. adams (5/19/2012)
© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-05-19 04:47 PM

Beautiful. One of your very best I'm thinking.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-05-19 05:50 PM

*sigh*...I have been to such a place where the peace is sureal...The visions are perfect...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2012-05-19 10:47 PM

Amazing what you can do with a few well placed words...and an endless supply of talent, Bruce.
                          Ida
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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4 posted 2012-05-20 02:03 AM

Your poetry is a beautiful word dream.
Very nice... so enjoyed.
Ms. E
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