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Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

0 posted 2012-05-16 01:11 PM

Oblivion. Sought in cheap whisky
Found
That hazing
But temporary
Like the innocence of ours

Warmth. A friend I hold to me
Bound
But fading
Like memories
Like the brilliance of stars

Sisters of my torment
Hurt and time
A departed lover's scent
Enveloping. Devine.

Circumstances freshly made
Fistfuls of tear-soaked sheets
The hope that pain will fade
A comfort scantly sweet

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-16 02:07 PM

I'm sure you managed to get through it all right.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

2 posted 2012-05-16 02:16 PM

Cheers ;-)

But thankfully those are feelings from the past, not the present :-)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-05-16 02:22 PM

I hate it when people don't qualify their poems as being in the past, so I redid my first comment

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

4 posted 2012-05-16 02:46 PM

Well I did write it today.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2012-05-16 02:54 PM

Feelings... some how they make things so complicated. Keep it up.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-05-16 07:43 PM

Well said...I could feel the pain you felt at the time...you write well...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2012-05-16 11:19 PM

Nice writing...James

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

8 posted 2012-05-17 04:43 AM

Thank you all.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2012-05-20 04:08 AM

Pain well described poetically.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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