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Open Poetry #48

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Dawn Brink
Junior Member

since 2011-04-28

Posts 44
South Africa

0 posted 2012-05-12 07:07 PM

You lean in and touch my face,
I tremble at your embrace. We’re crazy and
I lean in and feel your heart race.

We’re on a path together, just you and
I and I don’t know where it’s leading, or if it’s leading
anywhere at all.

I tremble when I think of how
lost
we could get and then I shake my head and lean in
and touch your face and enjoy your embrace.

I’m uncertain and you’re uncertain and life is a
maze of paths and choices and splits and choices.
I lean in to you and know that right now, I choose being
with you
on this path.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-12 07:15 PM

Absolutely. Take today and worry about tomorrow when, and if, it comes. The feeling right about someone is a potent feeling, go with it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-12 11:14 PM

I followed your movements and thought this is tender and beautiful...well written...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dawn Brink
Junior Member

since 2011-04-28

Posts 44
South Africa

3 posted 2012-05-15 02:44 PM

Thank you very much

I appreciate your comments!

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