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Swan Lake |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England 
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Swan Lake The sunlight danced upon the lake Each ripple lapping to the tune Soft harmonies the mind reflects Of other songs that end too soon Upon Odette the spell was cast To glide by day a swan in form On magic lake from mother’s tears Until the night beauty adorns The Swan Queen now in gown so white Siegfried entranced her love pursues They dance away this night in love Odile’s disguise true love to lose Into the depths the spell to break To love in death, no more heartache |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Tragic love, but true love nonetheless . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* oh yes this flows with beauty and love...I am drawn to a tale read long ago...very well written... *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
The only thing I can find wrong with this is that I didn't write it. You are truly a talented poet and I look forward to reading more of your words. Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really like this -Juju |
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