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Open Poetry #46
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2010-04-06 11:44 AM

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At night a smile—
From warm rooms passing by
The April rain


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-04-06 12:51 PM

Yo John,

Warm rooms are nice during the April rainy season.

Bobby
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
2 posted 2010-07-19 05:04 AM

Very nicely put. Another excellent observation communicated.

...a "Paul Baumer guarding the Russians" moment (AQOTWF). Sorta been there, too. Peace.
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2010-07-19 12:35 PM

"From warm rooms passing by." love it.
                               Ida
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