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Open Poetry #46

Picture Frame

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-04-04 10:44 PM

Picture Frame

It's never enough
It never has been.
Your domestic attention.
I am fed,
I am clothed
I am a lonely.
A sad life based on pantomimic lies.

A grand empty picture frame,
With no great memory to reflect.

Zeitgeist.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-04-06 01:02 PM

Very impressive imagery, yet so traurig!

Love,
Margherita

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

2 posted 2010-04-06 10:31 PM

Thanks M. for your reply

Z.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2011-01-21 09:41 AM

Sad indeed, but you could always make memories to fill in that empty picture frame.

Well written.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2011-01-31 07:18 PM

This is very well written.

Bobby

Raevyn Elle
New Member

since 2011-06-27

Posts 2

5 posted 2011-06-29 11:38 AM

Very sad, but very well written.

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

6 posted 2011-09-26 12:44 PM

Yes, sad, but if you see your own reflection staring back--it's a start. And nothing wrong with a series of "small" memories. Cheer up, the big one is just around the corner.

Al

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