Open Poetry #46 |
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on their way to realize |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
Irises dot lace along hem of flowing creek where stanzas found the time to speak a child holds secrets 'neath her feet but hasn't yet realized what of it's meant or worth she runs & flies she kicks through before thinking a neighbor's new fallen pile of leaves spinning flying in arrayed spiral rings sinking stops just long enough to take in a look upon and smell the scent and what a thrill today has been she's far from being wrapped around disturbing lament with it's shuddering doubts to heaven sent or cried - why - have these angry clouds passed over the eyes of understanding on their way to realize * |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Captivating poetic offering and beautifully shaped too! Nice to read you again. Love, Margherita |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
lovely welcome home |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Really enjoyed the concrete poem- engaging; poignant.. and in my eye it looks like a tree with it`s reflection in water below~ masterful job making the form work so well with the subject. =) ~Amaryllis |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I could read this over and over for the view alone, Dale. M |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So good to read you again, and what a jewel you have given us with this poem, in so many ways Dale. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"a child holds secrets 'neath her feet" A child does indeed and you were blessed to see the child as well as the secret. So lovely to read you! |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dale, It is so good to read you again - and I particularly love Irises dot lace along hem of flowing creek This one line captivated me. A |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Gosh... I really love you people. I'm sorry I won't be doing much writing this summer, to much house work... ha ha. However... I have a lot of good notes, mostly in the minor keys and I'll probably see ya all this autumn/winter, of course you might keep on the lookout... I do throw things in on a whim. Thank you all so much dale |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale...been looking for you. I miss your words. ![]() |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Nice concrete shape and lovely sentiments Thanks for sharing, Al |
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