Open Poetry #46 |
Feed a Cold |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Eating chicken soup and fresh bread at 2:00 am makes me feel better. G'nite & sleep tight, Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
sounds most pleasant even when one is not unwell! ... hope you're feeling much better soon! is the 'magic' in the chicken, the soup, or the mind?! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I should have tried that last night |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Sound warms and snuggly. Hope you feel better. ooxx
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Drinking Jack Daniels An alternate therapy Mornings are a Bear! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely Alison, you share something with me that counts, eating when insomnia comes and knocks you, you made me hungry, I love very much the authenticity of your poem, a vibrant declaration to life and a good idea for dinner...thanks for the very enjoyable poem; yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My chicken soup is the family remedy for everything. Hope you feel better soon. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Alison, That just might work. I hate head colds. Love Bobby |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
An interesting write, maybe not suitable for me but i know what you are trying to say, thank you.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you all - this was really just a 2:30 am whine. Who better to whine to than people who actually don't have to hear me to understand. LongJohn, insert "tequila" into your response and I am there before you can hit send. A |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Ali Which came first, the chicken or the bread, or the bread or the chicken, or ... ooooooooh I'm so dizzy. Think I'll heat old coffee in the old mike. J Hey, nobody's human! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I loved your beautiful little gem...and it inspired my write "blowing on life's spoon" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhhh chicken soup cures eveything from an ingrown toenail to a broken heart well, maybe not really the broken heart but it can't hurt! I like it Alison (the poem AND the soup) |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Good morning here Alison. Hope you feel better. lol |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
I did try to send you up some chicken soup all the way up to Alaska. I tried putting in in an envolope but the soup leaked through the envelope and I had to throw it away. but then there was another problem ... no chickens ... O well, it would have ruined everything else in the mail box. J Hey, nobody's human! |
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Trapped - Nothing Member
since 2010-04-25
Posts 52 |
this poem is dimwitted and dull |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think Trapped-NOTHING needs some chicken soup, Alison. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you all. I am much better. Oh and, Trapped - I only got to the first word and lost interest. Seems my attention span is much like yours when it comes to drivel (note another D-word to add to your collection - and it would make your allteration attempts stronger.) Thank you for your comment. Can't say that I totally disagree with you, but it was a two minute write at 2:00 am when I was sick. You spent more time on your response than I spent on my little senryu. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...now be nice or zerobamma will invite you and the soot cookie TN to the white house for a beer. (soot is another term for crock..) |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Don`t let the bed bugs bite. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Alison I'm so sorry to hear that you are not well dear Alison, may God be with you.All the best for a speedy recovery. Love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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