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Open Poetry #46

Light

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2010-04-29 12:11 PM

My voice is there...
somewhere.
Tied up and gagged,
held prisoner,
in a dark dungeon.

As I struggle
to free myself
I am sustained
only by
a small shaft of light
from the narrow window
above me.

Ida Werrett

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-04-29 08:46 PM

Boy you always hit a nerve!

This is so effective...your poem made it hard to breathe.

It's always good to read you, Ida~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2010-04-29 08:47 PM

nice!

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2010-04-29 09:52 PM

Oh Ida, please keep clear of those dungeons.

That is no place for a lady. Love.

Lindsay

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