Open Poetry #46 |
deliverance |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
deliverance As a brisk winter wind teases the dancing-shadow moonbeams through deep, soft corridors of this white-velvet forest evening, all must be surrendered to such a time and place of gentle peace and fleeting sorrows, but the finest memories and dreams… of love. --- b. e. adams (1/9/2010) |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Responding to your poetry first is like walking through untouched snow. Your words still a resstless part of me. We all carry our memories of love, but you express it better than most of us. I am liking this one a lot, Bruce. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very nicely done indeed...i love how you managed to say so much in so few words! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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