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In This the New Year... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In This the New Year I shall hear a ballad be sung and see a feather write the moon and know that the Irish sing and see a cowboy in the noon I shall see a cobblestone lay the way and be serene in midst of gay and simonize all my floors that welcome me with open door then, in the write of response most in the welcome of gifted host as in the magic the magician sings on the lift of butterflies' wings see all the rainbows in the sky anniversaries hang on high see a wisdom from lower east see thus a dove on the nigh I shall be well in the repeat of song know in mind that one belongs the gift of Ladies what would be strong and in the sea we know the long in the Indian knowledge of we in these the suthernmost skies we acknowledge the romance that lies in the palm of trees that sigh then, in the young of the under in the lift of lee in the acknowledgement of mindset in the gift of we Should you see you here know that You are held most dear should you not hear this, the ring that I would want to bring to your heart know that I have tried to impart a signal to you, the poet sublime the word of you that always rhyme know that you then encompass all of the poetic words that pass to my brain in soulful refrain in my heart 'tis YOU remain Be well in this New Year Know that your Words are those I Hear Know that Your Song is the song that's Sung KNOW that you have just begun… know that the sigh of you is great know that your reasons always relate know that your chemistry is never too late know that somehow I can translate and be so very, very well in the wisdom of your swell know that I hear you in your sigh know that I hear on the bye and bye… In this the New Year might I translate may You know the Great of Great…. May you always be You 01.01.01 reposted 01.01.07 or a day or hour earlier - 12-29-10 once again |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
In a word... beautiful. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of poetry. I bow to you and yours. Peace, Love & Happiness in the New Year.  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Lovely writing, Sunshine... I enjoy these re-posts! The poem is lilting, musical and sparkling. Wonderful! And a happy new year to you and yours, too... Amaryllis |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..>>wow, quite the song..! much enjoyed reading..>>spiros |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A wealth of cleverness in this poem as only you can do... And, as for me, the sun will shine On this simplistic life of mine And I will bathe in glow of light With warmth exuding from her write. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"see a feather write the moon" ... what a GRAND-FINE line !! |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Beautiful. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully written Karilea. Thanks for the repost it's a real upbuilding flow of thoughts presented so unselfishly. Best to you! Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...May you always be you!!  Happy new year! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thank you for the beautiful thoughts and wishes through this new year ... peace, joy and a whole lotta sunshine |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
This is a great poem very nice ,enjoyed reading , thank you. |
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