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Open Poetry #46

The Reason I'm Here (senryu)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2010-03-20 09:46 AM

I almost didn't make it out alive.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2010-03-20 12:50 PM

Well I applaud you for posting this....you are very brave and I'm proud that you care

and of course, I'm glad that you're here! We all make mistakes an in those mistakes we learn.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2010-03-20 05:12 PM

Glad you made it!

Great lesson for all. Hope things have changed in your life.

Eric

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2010-03-20 05:33 PM

powerfully effective 'slice of reality' write!

... wish America's 'young folk' in particular could all see this 'penning' !!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2010-03-21 04:11 AM

very convincing post,

best wishes

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2010-03-22 03:12 AM

Powerful message, Dixie.
Ida

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2010-03-22 10:40 PM

Glad you made it

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

7 posted 2010-03-22 11:57 PM

Dear Dixie, yes every picture does tell a story and I'm very pleased that you are

here to put it on PIP. Thank God you made it. Take more care next time.

Lindsay

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2010-03-23 03:19 AM

Definitely not good!

Nice little poem though

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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