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Open Poetry #46

Without Your Love

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-22 09:20 AM

In my darkest hour
Of solitary revelry
The time alone
Helps me to be free
The years are all misty
Now that you are here
And living without you
Is the only thing I fear
I am all that I am
Because you took my hand
Without your love
I, alone, cannot stand

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2010-03-22 11:27 AM

damn! This is beautiful in it's melancholy~especially loved the ending, very powerful.....I relate to this very much so in my life now.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-03-22 01:35 PM

awww! Darn! This is beautiful!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2010-03-22 06:10 PM

Such a powerful declaration of deep emotions... this is superb!!

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2010-03-23 03:38 AM

I love the simplicity of this poem.

Z.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2010-03-23 03:41 AM

Between the two of us, if there were a competition of who could write the best about love, I think you'd have just pulled into the lead.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

6 posted 2010-03-23 08:27 AM

Good thing this isn't a competition Paul.
You would win every time.

Thank you all for reading.

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