Open Poetry #46 |
Roads That Lead Us Nowhere |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
This poem is about saying goodbye to your old life.. cutting away the "Cancer" so to speak n starting all over again.. without your family.. without your friends.. just you.. an open road, a packed up car a few tissue box's and a whole lot of broken memories.. 2011 -- Everything Changes.. I've got friends i never see A dad that barely remembers me Got a life i wish i didn't live A Few people i'll never forgive I've got a heart that people love to break They just give me more than i can take Today i'll finally walk away I've got no reason left to stay ____ Cause i've got friends i never see A dad that barely remembers me A million tears left to cry A thousand reasons to say goodbye... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
OW! This is painful. I'm an old grandpa kinda fella but just let me give you a hug to let you know some things are still alright and there's people out there that really do care. Hope you're walking away into a new positive experience. Chin up Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
And I am an old gradma. Hugs to you. Live your life. Hug yourself and be who you are. latearrival |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
That hit close to the bone. I was that dad who . . . Well, just let me say I made some awful mistakes. I loved this. It hurt, but I loved it. New day. Keep trying. When early morning quietness seeps into my being it's like I'm being hugged by everything good in the world.—August 16, 2010 |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks Guys.. it's greatly appreciated.. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
New Year, New hope. Make yourself happy, dear one, and let the rest go. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh how I know this feeling and have done it several times I wish you well, Miss Caterpillar, on your way to becoming a butterfly! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this a lot ... don't know what else to say, but that I like it. You touched me. Alison |
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