Open Poetry #46 |
Waiting for the lab results |
Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
You never see it coming- The night might be warm taffy, as sweet, as malleable, but it`s on the edges, patient as a ploughhorse, waiting calm outside the line of vision, where only in peripheral you perceive. Like the shell-shocked driver behind the twisted wheel, pale and bleeding, heart as faint and rapid as an oriole... who never saw what happened, or what hit them, you tremble in the grip of fate`s caprice. . . . ps: This is in thoughts of my sister, (not myself) , who is waiting for the news...thank you~ A [This message has been edited by Amaryllis (12-30-2010 12:36 AM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Best wishes for a good report.latearrival |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Thank you, Latearrival...I neglected to mention it is my sister, not myself, who`s waiting on tenterhooks...yet yes! We still hope for the best news. Thanks for your comment. (I`ll edit a msg into the post.) A |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
May you and yours read the words you seek... "negative." My best wishes to all in the new year. Peace. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Thank you so much, Andrew. A |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
The explanation was not needed.I was not sure whose test it was for.Could have been you or a parent or a child.A sister,the same.I wish for the best.latearrival |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Thanks, LA Your warm heart encourages me. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope your sister gets good news, Amarylis. I know how nerve-wracking wating can be. Hugs, Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wishing her well and you too as you watch her waiting |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hoping she gets a clean bill of health, Amaryllis, You put the "waiting" confusion and despair so well in this poem. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yes, the anticipation of news can be extremely hard. Nothing is scarier than the unknown. May the results be good and you and your sister embrace a wonderful new year to come, along with many to follow. My prayers are with her.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My thoughts are with you and yours. Please keep us advised... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
May Fate choose, capriciously or otherwise, to bring smiles of relief to your sister's heart in the form of the best possible news. Owl |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Many thanks to everyone for your concern and replies...they say we won`t hear until next tuesday! An eternity... =( A |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressively rendered anxiety, dear Amaryllis. The best one can do I feel is to use the time to fight the negative thoughts, which of course is not easy. Love and may the results bring peace of mind. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aw sweet dear lady Amaryllis~ I'm keeping you and your sis in my prayers. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...hoping for good news...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I do hope that her news was good. Waiting is hell - you expressed this well in your poem. Please let us know how your sister is. Alison |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Much thanks to everyone...we just heard today...BENiGN! Oh halleluia ! (sp haha) SUCH relief. She feels she has a new lease on life! Thankful for the times that things go `right`, in life...and for everyone`s care & concern. This was made even harder initially because she lives so many miles away & I couldn`t be with her to support. But so thankful for a good-news turnout! Wow. All my best to everyone~ Amaryllis (Sharon) |
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