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Ignorant Bliss
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Ignorant Bliss |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Describe me the pleasures of ignorant bliss, When life's like a train you are bound to miss, When casual trifles appear in pink, And wonders untouchable instantly shrink. You don't want to alter reality frail, So every bold thought finds itself in a jail. You welcome no changes, you try just to match The role you play, fate's satirical sketch. You say you don't mind it, I know its false, Your day, like a wheel, monotonously rolls. You suffer to fit an invisible hole That life cast you into. To fight or to crawl? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now, this is a very well presented reality check. I enjoyed the expression thoroughly. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I can relate to that reality check! good write. Lori |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You crawl right out of it! Because on that other side, good things are waiting for you! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
and every avenue seems to be downhill leading to that hole  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Cool. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow, this is loaded with emotion and so powerful in it's message. Good poem~ |
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