Open Poetry #46 |
Letting Go |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Let it go they say as if it were a winged thing within our grasp awaiting to fly away with our pain if we but loosed our grip Let me go I say as if it were a clawed thing within its grasp trying to pry away from the pain if I but loosed it's grip LGR(C)12/30/10 |
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irmirt Junior Member
since 2010-06-09
Posts 18 |
Thanks, this made me think... Addicted to issues of life. Others think we can brush away our pains... But we know differently! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for understanding. Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Great double image here, Lori. A true Catch-22 if we allow it to be, and sometimes we have no choice in the matter. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I think, pain needs to be absorbed in order to be tolerated ... no-one ever lets go of pain ... it stays with us and every now and then, given the right circumstance, usually a quiet time, it will resurface ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe pain defines who we are, how we handle the hard times...and letting it go, orchastrates change...some are adverse to change, which only makes life much more difficult...and to, if you really love someone, the greatest gift of love you can bestow is to let them go and be who they were meant to be...life evolves, and so must we, otherwise we are stuck in a maze...or in the claws of life... very well done... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, Rex & LeeJ, I thank you for your in depth comments...you showed me more than what I wrote. Lori |
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