Open Poetry #46 |
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Awakening |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Awakening Wondering why when time has passed When time is on your side Thoughts of now and thoughts of then Are between the lines in hide. Wondering why the silence is When discovery comes to light A moment here, a moment there Lost moments throughout the night. Just words these are of many thoughts Before sun begins its rise The wonderings of the wanderings That lay before these eyes. So now the quiet becomes the norm The sighing laid to rest... Just words these are of morning thoughts In peacefulness expressed. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
love that concept of: "morning thoughts In peacefulness expressed(!)" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the constrasting shades that dance in the shadows. Happy New Year Maureen~ |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Interesting how the mind rambles over a cup of morning coffee in a quiet moment. You describe it very well, Maureen ![]() |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Rather nice early morning musing, M. I find that early morning thoughts (after the second cup of java) to be the most profound ones of the day. Seems you have that idea also. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I also have my morning moments (call it my moment with God) which sort of sets the scene for the rest of the day. Well expressed, Maureen. Happy New Year! Helen |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this Maureen. My thoughts seem to come and go through out the night, wrecking sleep and is the cause of my addiction to late night talk radio programs. And most probably why I always prefferd to take the night shifts at work. latearrival |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bruce, I use to love the holidays, but everything is so commercialized and over done it seems, (maybe that comes with aging)I am trying to just enjoy each day as it comes now and find some peace in each. Wishing you a calm and happy new year. Lori, thanks for visiting. I think about you often and hope all is well on the west coast. Have a great new year! ![]() Michael, and I only have one cup in the morning~~ wonder what would happen if I have another ![]() Hope your new year has started off great! JerryPat, I am up so early my thoughts have too much time to muse~~ sometimes a good thing and others, well you know. So I am trying my best now to not try and think between the lines anymore ![]() btw, I am enjoying reading you Helen, thank you (me, too) problem is I spend a lot of time speaking those thoughts out loud and at times I am sure I have heard an answer or two ![]() Jo, sleep~~ what's that? I don't think there are any night teaching jobs, so I just have to deal with those rambling thoughts, that invade my dreams. Thank you for your thoughts. Happy New Year all, M |
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