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XGarapanX
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0 posted 2010-12-28 08:17 AM



The musk of your scent
lingering upon my chest
makes me half insane.

© ·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`· 2010

© Copyright 2010 ·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`· - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-12-28 08:22 AM


Uh huh. Been there. done that.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2010-12-28 08:28 AM


Hahahaa!! Yup yup! That's what I like about Haiku's, doesn't take much to say where it's at.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

ethome
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3 posted 2010-12-28 09:14 AM


I know what you mean.

Big problem for me, I'm already half insane so if I go anywhere near that scent well, I'm gonna be a handful.....(smile)

I like this and it's a good topic for conversation.

Take care

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

[This message has been edited by ethome (12-28-2010 12:14 PM).]

XGarapanX
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4 posted 2010-12-28 09:20 AM


·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Margherita
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5 posted 2010-12-29 06:05 AM


Welcome back ... and with such a stirring creation!

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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6 posted 2010-12-29 06:27 AM


TY

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-12-29 07:05 AM


garapan, cool use of the senryu tool..enjoyed it
BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2010-12-29 10:56 AM


that's a good kind of crazy!!!
Balladeer
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9 posted 2010-12-29 12:17 PM


Makes scents to me!

Fingerprints on skin
Memories of passion spent
Love your DNA.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2010-12-29 01:27 PM


Is this the "drive you crazy" thing you guys are always talking about?Lori
XGarapanX
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11 posted 2010-12-29 06:10 PM


Hahahahaa! Thank you all for dropping in. Most kind of you! And, erm... I don't think this is what many men are referring to when they speak of being driven crazy by a woman, lol! But it sure is one of the best ways she drives a man crazy...

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

XGarapanX
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12 posted 2010-12-29 06:12 PM


And oh, hey, love the verses Balladeer! Awesome!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Amberzlynnc
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13 posted 2011-01-09 11:59 PM


Enjoyed!
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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14 posted 2011-01-10 10:32 AM


Love it. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

When you decide to walk away- walk away.  Don't look back, In that moment you'll lose trust and faith- in yourself.

Klassy Lassy
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15 posted 2011-01-10 06:23 PM


very loverly incense...!
XGarapanX
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16 posted 2011-01-10 06:55 PM


Haiku! Gesundheit!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

mikeandrew
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17 posted 2011-01-11 01:26 AM


so much said in just a few exact lines great work.
XGarapanX
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18 posted 2011-01-11 05:20 AM


Thanks!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

faithmairee
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19 posted 2011-01-11 11:53 PM


great litle poem...i love it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

XGarapanX
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20 posted 2011-01-11 11:57 PM


·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

katahdin
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21 posted 2011-01-19 11:14 PM


Powerfull! enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

XGarapanX
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22 posted 2011-01-20 01:40 AM


Thank you. I feel it is as well.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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