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Open Poetry #46
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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
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0 posted 2010-12-22 12:13 PM


Between the date palms we walk
together again my golden friend
under the sweet smell of shade
the ripened madjools we raid
together palm to palm we laid
dreaming of golden jewels
eating ambrosial madjools.
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Bastet
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1 posted 2010-12-22 12:28 PM

Very evocative poem.
JerryPat
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2 posted 2010-12-22 10:53 AM

Ah, sounds like aphrodisiac in nature.

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3 posted 2010-12-22 06:36 PM

Now that is my kind of day!  Well done.


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