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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-12-17 10:44 AM

"I think...
I love her"
you declared
all I could do
was acknowledge
and assimilate
your feelings

I could admit
  to
   feeling
the same way
as you do, but
I bite my lip
hold my tongue
and my love
   for you
tastes of blood

Image Credit

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2010-12-17 10:56 AM

Wow! you spare no words, show no mercy and take no prisoners...Trina your work is incredible... tangible images and emotions.

Lori

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-12-17 10:58 AM

heh Take no prisoners- leave no one alive

Thanx Lori

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-12-17 11:09 AM

Would begging help?

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2010-12-17 09:19 PM

Powerful images all the way around!

Your words made me think the following line:

"Do not confess your sins to me, for I have my own."

Thanks for sharing.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2010-12-19 04:54 AM

Jerry- Nope.

Thanx for looking in.

Andrew- Thanx!

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

6 posted 2010-12-19 05:38 PM

wow you really do write like me. Love this smooth concise each word like a well placed knife hitting its mark. Emotion without explanation or apology.

A nod A wink
Then we fall
endless distance
No time at all

We know its coming
the sudden stop
but we keep hoping
we will wake up.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2010-12-19 05:48 PM

Ouch! Love can be just that painful.
Reminds me of the old eddy arnold song

You Don't Know Me

You give your hand to me and then you say hello
And I can hardly speak my heart is beating so
And anyone could tell you think you know me well
But you don't know me

No you don't know the one who dreams of you at night
And longs to kiss your lips and longs to hold you tight
To you I'm just a friend that's all I've ever been
But you don't know me

For I never knew the art of making love
Though my heart aches with the love for you
Afraid and shy I let my chance go by
The chance you might have loved me too

You gave your hand to me and then you say goodbye
I watch you walk away beside a lucky guy
You'll never never know the one who loves you so
No you don't know me

Excellent subject and well presented Trina.
That pic is a killer.

Take care

Eric

My favorite oxymoron, "rap music"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2010-12-19 10:38 PM

Walter- Thanx so much!

Eric- I like this - "Afraid and shy I let my chance go by, The chance you might have loved me too"

I was captivated by that picture.
Thanx for looking in, Be safe.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

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