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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
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0 posted 2010-12-19 04:17 PM



happiness is an empty box
Alone in an endless desert

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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1 posted 2010-12-19 04:57 PM


Strange way of looking at happiness.

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2010-12-19 05:29 PM


Well, I guess if there's nothing in the box then it can't cause any trouble, maybe??
Or you could rent it for storage.
There's always something positive in everything.

Endless desert, hummm, will they be giving out any beer in that desert? If not, I can't see any happiness.

Eric

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2010-12-19 10:32 PM


Empty box in the desert.....thats something to ponder. Enjoyed.

Ha. Eric your response is always amusing

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

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