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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-12-16 11:58 PM


Destroyed in the blink of an eye
My heart was vaporized
The dirty hope you gave me
Then i realized you just made me wait
For nothing but a heart broken day
The lies i lived for are nothing anymore

You broke me somehow
The heart you let go
The nice eyes you had
The beautiful person you are
How can you take me apart like that?
My heart has nothing let to make it run
Is this all i have left?
The words that no one can see
My lonely words are cold
The life that was free is broke

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2010-12-17 12:20 PM


Ouch! Some serious hurt here. "The dirty hope you gave me" Powerful line. Good luck.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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