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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-12-16 11:47 PM


That dirt has me screaming for mercy
The cool morning has me longing to be gone
Let my heart run away
My body cant take the pain
You destroy me everyday
Let me be myself again
You know what your doing
And you keep it coming like a river that goes out of sight
The troubles and pains
You never called me
You destroyed a heart that understood
You can never take it back to the lost and found
cause there is nothing left
The fire has turned it to ash
You have me in a trap.

© Copyright 2010 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2010-12-17 12:24 PM


We all carry a key to our personal cage, it's just whether we choose to use it or not. Hope you find your way to freedom. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2010-12-17 02:12 AM


Good delivery of the heavy emotional trap.

I enjoyed the strength of the read.

Eric

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