Open Poetry #46 |
Trapped |
gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
That dirt has me screaming for mercy The cool morning has me longing to be gone Let my heart run away My body cant take the pain You destroy me everyday Let me be myself again You know what your doing And you keep it coming like a river that goes out of sight The troubles and pains You never called me You destroyed a heart that understood You can never take it back to the lost and found cause there is nothing left The fire has turned it to ash You have me in a trap. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
We all carry a key to our personal cage, it's just whether we choose to use it or not. Hope you find your way to freedom. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good delivery of the heavy emotional trap. I enjoyed the strength of the read. Eric |
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