Open Poetry #46 |
Hold Me |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
How I long for Your arms around me Surrendering To your strength To enfold me Holding the hurt At bay LGRĀ©12/14/10 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, some things don't need a lot of words to have an impact. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
simply wonderful |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Simple. Brief. To the point. Point taken. |
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greytree Junior Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 45Wales |
Just lovely. Made me smile. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh! Essential heart whisper. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine- sometimes saying nothing says the most. __________________________________________ Jerry- I'm sure your special person will be glad you got the point, if you're lucky maybe you'll get one of these _________________________________________ greytree- back at you! thanks. ___________________________________________ Margherita-Thanks for hearing my wisper. Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You make the words sound warm and inviting even with the hurt involved. Made your point so very well. Eric My favorite oxymoron, "rap music" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Eric and Trina- Hey thanks for running this one up the flag pole again. I'm gald you liked it. Eric, thanks for letting me know I got my point across, I appreciate the feedback. Lori |
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