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Open Poetry #46

No Part of Me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-12-13 06:20 PM

No Part of Me

I wanted to buy
her a sexy dress.
I wanted her to wear
it just for me.
I wanted to feel
her caress.
I wanted her to
come onto me.
I wanted to kiss
her tender lips.
I wanted to taste
her sensuality.
She had something
else in mind,
she wanted
no part of me.

JamesLee
10December
2010

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-12-13 06:22 PM

hurts so bad!

Made me feel sad~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-12-13 10:13 PM

"I wanted to taste
her sensuality."

I love that. Its really her loss.

Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-12-13 10:24 PM

I wrote you a poem. PiP zeroed in on one word and refused it. Life's a . . .

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2010-12-13 10:30 PM

Well, that bites! But not in a good way. All the same, enjoyed the read.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-14 03:04 AM

James
This started out so hot then it fizzeled.
That sucks when that happens doesn't it?
Hey with your romantic prowess you'll make a great come back....I can't wait to read it.

Eric

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