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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

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Redlands,CA,USA

0 posted 2010-12-12 04:54 PM

Somthing so special
Found under the Christmas tree
Daughters in delight

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-12-12 05:05 PM

This is a really nice haiku for the Christmas season. In fact, it probably is the first haiku that I`ve ever seen written for the holidays. I hope that you and you family enjoy Christmas.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

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Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2010-12-12 05:08 PM

Earl: Thanks for the read and write. We're working on the decorations slowly, but surely. Hope your holidays are festive, fun, and safe. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

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Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-12-12 05:21 PM

Nicely done. Christmas cheer.

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Andrew Scott
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Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2010-12-12 05:26 PM

Thanks Jerry. May you find some joy in the season. Peace my friend.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-13 01:13 AM

Well done Andrew!
Says what's important.

Eric

gilead
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nevada, USA

6 posted 2010-12-13 05:21 AM

Tantalizing; though what is found is not revealed, it caused delight, and that's the spirit! Thanks for an uplifting haiku, indeed, first of its kind for me! Let the fires burn bright in the old campground! Happy holidays!

Art

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

7 posted 2010-12-13 05:34 PM

It conveys joy that lingers.

Lovely haiku.

Love,
Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

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Oregon

8 posted 2010-12-13 07:35 PM

Isn't is amazing to watch children become the light? This spontaneity of this makes me smile!

Andrew Scott
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Redlands,CA,USA

9 posted 2010-12-13 09:44 PM

To one and all, thank you for your kind words. They are the presents under the tree. My personal perspective on this one... what is so special under the tree for me are my daughters and their delight at finding their own special gifts. Hope you all enjoy the season. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

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Watertown, NY

10 posted 2010-12-13 10:07 PM

My favorite part of Christmas- watching the children open their presents

Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Andrew Scott
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Redlands,CA,USA

11 posted 2010-12-13 10:27 PM

Lady Sin: Glad you enjoyed. Happy Holidays to you and yours.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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